Introduction To The Descriptive Writing Piece

For the second piece that you will be reading in my portfolio is the best paper I wrote showing descriptive writing. This piece was actually one of my journals for my English class, simply about 150 words, just a free write for ten minutes. I have of course taken it and developed it a bit more, or as my instructor taught me, I fleshed it out. I picked this piece because I feel that it really captures the moment, and as we all have been children we should be able to relate.